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Well, well, well, what a fanfiction is have been! Seriously, when you anonced it at first, I wondered how would star tour and the force awakens could go together. But you did it! You put them together and seeing is was good, you submited it here=D
In only seven chapters, you made amazing work on the character developement.
At first AC was an ass, he became a hero. Enna was a simple teenager, she became a fighter. Rurik was a cartographer, he turned out to be an inquisitor!
The good old Goldenheart twist is still working fine on me=D
Talking about Goldenheart signature, one of the thing I find funny with all you work would always be your cameos! And I just realised that Enna made the Goldenheart bite!
As always, I'm amazed by your work. It's always so clean and good. Funny and thrilling. Making me overreact, that's how I like my reading^^
Awsome work!
P.O.V of Aleena

I regained consciousness from the Dragon's shout. The first thing I saw was Elsa, looking at her hands. I got up when she fell unconscious.
We all ran up to her. I checked her, she was okay. Aside from being unconscious of course.
“There is an inn close, let's get her there.” I said as Vilkas lifted her from the ground.
We all descended from the hill, aiming for Kynsgrove's inn. Except for Delphine, who just stood, looking at the Dragon's skeleton.
Our team entered the empty tavern. We left Elsa in a room to recover and began to summarized what happened to try understand it.
“What do we know?” I asked.
“She defeated the Dragon with some kind of magic duel.” Stated Vilkas.
“Yes, but certainly there is something else...” wondered Lydia.
Fenrir barked to comment on the fact that he never heard of a mage blacking out like that.
“Neither have I...” answered Aleena.
“Hum...?” began Lydia.
“Aleena understand wolves in a certain manner.” finished Vilkas.
Fenrir barked again to state the fact he's worried about Elsa's health.
“I am too, buddy.” I answered.
Delphine entered the inn.
“She is Dragonborn. At last, I found her.” she said to herself.
“Ho yeah, I forgot. She is the one who lead us to this mess.” I snarled.
“Excuse me?” asked Delphine.
“Calm down.” asked Vilkas, putting his hand on my shoulder.
I took it off and walked up to Delphine, pointing at her. “Elsa blacked out because you bought her here. I hope you have a good explaination.”
Delphine used her hand to put down my accusative finger.
“I do... I'm one of the last member of the Blades-”
“The protectors of the emperor before the Penitus Oculatus?” asked Vilkas.
“Yes. I was searching for the Dragonborn for some time now.”
“To what purpose?!” I snapped.
“You better calm down.” said Delphine, it seem like I pissed her off.
Alright! Come at me granny! “Or what?” I taunted.
“Or I'm going to calm you down the only way you understand.” She threatened, putting one hand on her sword.
I clenched my fists and was ready to strike when I heard Fenrir's barke of disaproval from my action and taunting.
I looked at him, huffed and turned away to Elsa's room, closing the door behind me.


P.O.V of Vilkas.

Of all our time together, never have I saw her this protective for someone. I'm starting to be afraid for her wellbeing as well. I mean... Yes, I like Elsa... but not at the point of accusing people like that. It don't seem like her at all. I turned my gaze to Lydia. “I'm leaving that to you.” I said, walking to meet up Aleena.
She aswered with a nod while I walked to the closed door. I swallowed and pushed it open.
I saw Aleena, sat beside Elsa, looking at her with anxiety in her eyes.
I don't want to do that... But I have to.
I crossed my arms and drily asked her, “Care to explain?”.
“There is nothing to explain.” she said, not moving her gaze from Elsa.
“There is things to explain!” I snapped. “The way you acted... it's not you, my love.” I pleaded.
“How is that not me? You know how I am when it come to friends.” she calmly answered, still looking at Elsa.
“I know it damn well! But this... this is not for a friend that you act like that. Nor a lover... But more like... for a sibling.” I said, closing to her.
“You know I never knew my brothers or sisters...” she answered as calm as possible.
Will you react a little?! “That's the thing! I don't know! I don't know your past! Your life! I don't understand why you act like that! I want to help, but you don't let me in! You never let me in too deep! Ever!”I snapped, making her turn her head to me.
I can't belive what I'm going to say... “That's part of the reason I stopped going to missions with you! I never can know anything! I love you, but this? This is not healthy at all for our relationship! You need to let me in your heart from time to time! I let you wonder in mine all the time, even when it hurts! I can't stand to see your heart bleed from it's past anymore!” I calmed my voice and continued. “I'm not asking you to say everything now, but at last what I need to know to understand why you acted like you did...” Looking right in her eyes.
I saw her clench her fists and answer me, “Please... could you... let me think some minutes? Alone?” dodgeing my gaze.
Not gonna happen. “If one of us go elswhere than here, it'll be part ways forever.”
Realizing what I just said, Aleena opened her eyes wide as well as her mouth who couldn't stay in the same place anymore.
“You can think here, but I'll be at your side.” I added.
She closed her mouth as well as her eyes and aswered, “Very well... I'll explain what you need to know. Take a sit.”
I took a chair and sat by her side.
“My father... destroyed my life... when I was a baby, he flew from home with me. Leaving my pregant mother to her fate...” she began, raging from the simple word of : father.
“He took me away from my family, beliving I had a great destiny he could use for himself...” She uncleshed her fists a little.
“He was wrong... And when he understood it... he disapeared again... leaving my seven year old self in the wild... with nothing. He betrayed me... He's disgusting... and...” She calmed down from her anger and directed her eyes in mine. “Do you begin to understand now? Why I...” Tears began to appear at the corners of her eyes. “Why I'm such a mess?...” she finished, leaving her teary self to fall in my arms.
“Shhh...” I calmly rubbed her white hairs to soothe her.


P.O.V of Aleena.

“I need to stop... I have to stop! Stop crying! You're strong! And strong don't cry!” I thought to myself, fighting to stop my tears. I managed to and was able to just let muself fall in Vilkas' embrace.
Some minutes after, Lydia entered the room.
“Delphine is gone. I could gather some informations from her. We need to meet her at Riverwood when we'll be ready.” she reported.
“Thank you Lydia.” Said Vilkas.
The Housecarl nodded and made her way to her room. Before exiting Elsa's, she turned to me and added “She'll be fine my Thane.”
I turned my gaze in Elsa's direction. Still in Vilkas' hug. “I guess I'll stay in his warmth for some more time...” I thought to myself as my eyes felt heavy.

END OF CHAPTER 13
Skyrim Warmaiden. Chapter 13.
The team just defeated a dragon. But Elsa, the dragonborn, is out of the game. In the meantime, the team do the only thing they can : wait.
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P.O.V of Elsa.

“Wait!” pleaded Delphine. I turned to her as she continued. “If we wait, we might miss this opportunity to gather informations!”
“You're right.” I said. She was right, I kind of got ahead of myself here... I wanted to be away from her so much I let my own feelings to get in the way of my logic... Aleena is rubbing on me that's clear. “I'll go wake my companions...” I said, continuing my way upstairs.


P.O.V of Aleena.

I like those moments. Vilkas and I were in our bed, covered by warm furs. Cradled against each others I dived into this feeling. Our lover's comfort was getting on my eyes, shutting them little by little.
It might have been an hour, or less, I heard a knock on our door, making us open eyes.
“Aleena? Vilkas? You're in there?”
“Yes?” I asked.
“Sorry to wake you, we need to go, quick. I'll explain on the way. I'll go wake the others.”
Vilkas and I looked at each others and shrugged. And got out of bed to gear up.


P.O.V of Elsa.

I walked up to Lydia's room and knocked.
“Lydia?”
“Yes, Thane?”
“We need to go.” I said.
“Alright.” she replied through the door.
I, then, walked to my room to get my bag and waited the others with Delphine.
Fenrir, Aleena and Vilkas got out of their room first.
“So, what's happening?” asked Vilkas.
I looked at Lydia who was walking up to us while I answered, “Long story short, we need to go slay a Dragon and get information about them.”
“Alright... Why now?”
“We must arrive as soon as possible to Kynesgrove in order to get what we need.” replied Delphine.
“Aren't you...?” asked Aleena.
“I'm the inn-owner. Are you ready? Can we go?” She asked, walking to the exit.
“I'll explain on the way.” I added as we all made for the exit to begin our way.
“You better, Kynesgrove is at Skyrim's other side!” complained Aleena.

Our night walk arrvied at it's end when we saw Kynesgrove. The sun was setting and a cold breeze cooled our minds from this road.
As we approached the city, a familiar cry came to Aleena and I's ears. We looked at each others.
“Is that...?” I began.
“Yes.” sternly replied Aleena who unstrapped her battleaxe and prepared it.
The action made Vilkas unsheath his two-handed sword and prompter Fenrir to begin growling.
Lydia, her, kept her gaze on me, waiting my reaction as we all made our way for the village.
Our team entered the zone when a woman ran up to us.
“You need to go! A Dragon is attacking! You must flee.” she said in panic.
“Do you know where it is?” I asked.
“Up here.” She said, pointing at an hill. “I don't know what it's doing, but I won't be here when it happens.” she finished, now fleeing.
We all readied our weapons and began our ascend. As we walked up the hill, animals ran away as I saw Fenrir getting more and more aggressive.
We reached the old tomb and what I saw chilled me to the bones.


P.O.V of Aleena.

What I saw gave me the chills. A large column on energy was getting out of the tomb as a black Dragon flew around it, shouting something from time to time. I recognised this Dragon. It's the one who attacked Helgen. I tightened my hold on my axe, looking at it flying around.
Fenrir is growling more than ever as the Dragon stopped and shouted a final time. “SLEN TIID VO!”.
The ground trembled as the burrow got destroyed from the inside, letting a Dragon skeleton to emerge from it.
We all lost footing when it came out.
I roared and looked at his friend.
They talked exclusively in Dragon tongue. Apparently talking about us, as they repeatedly looked at Elsa.
I only understood the last words of the black Dragon. “Tue les mortels.” I jumped at Elsa, helping her dodge a fire breath. We both turned to it, seeing Vilkas and Lydia distracting it while Fenrir tried his best to damage the reptile's wings. Delphine did what she could with her bow while Lydia shield-bashed it as much as she could, distracting it even further.
Elsa and I nodded at each others as I jumped in to help the others.


P.O.V of Fenrir.

“Suffer you overgrown lizard!” I said, as I leaped and bite on the beast's left wing severly bruising it.
It seem it did not liked it. It gave a powerful shove with it, sending me fly up to Elsa's side.


P.O.V of Elsa.

“Gods Fenrir! You alright there boy?” I asked as he got up and jumped at the Dragon again. “That mean yes.” I said, unleashing a frost beam at the Dragon.
The beast shouted, making a shockwave send my comrads in the air. It then looked at me and shouted a frost breath to counter my magic.
We both maintained our powers at equilibrium while the others were slowly getting up.
I felt my powers decrasing as the beast slowly gained against me.
The time slowed for me. I looked at everyone, getting up the best they could, except Aleena. She was still on the ground, dizzied by the shockwave.
I could feel the Dragon's rage and hatred through the beam we unleashed at each other.
I can't let it win. If he win... if he win... Helgen... will repeat itself... I can't let that happen... I WON'T let that happen!
“You think you can beat my with ice? I am the queen of ice and snow!” I screamed at the top of my lungs, unleashing all of my powers. Making my beam quickly win aginst his. The Dragon froze solid, giving me time to shout at it a last time, “FUS!” shattering it to pieces.
I began to feel something on my hands.
I looked at them. They had indigo blue veins all over them. Said veins got all the way on my arms as I felt them on my face as well and all faded to black when I saw the Dragon corpse burn away like the last one.
END OF CHAPTER 12
P.O.V of Elsa.

Aleena certainly is pissed off... The heavy door didn’t stood a chance when she kicked it. I guess we’re off to Riverwood now.
On the way, we encountered some vampires. They cried for their lives when Aleena beheaded them one by one. I hope she’ll calm down before killing the one we have to meet.


P.O.V of Vilkas.

She have to calm down, if she continue to do so, she’ll trigger her blood. And she don’t want that as much as me.


P.O.V of Aleena.

“There! We’re in Riverwood! Now for the sleeping giant inn and a fist in a face.” I said
“Will you calm down already!” snapped Elsa. Making me turn to her.
“We risked our lives for nothing! Don’t tell me you’re okay with that?!”
“She is right, Aleena, you should calm down, at this rate...” pleaded Vilkas.
I took a deep breath and tried to calm down. Vilkas was right. I shouldn’t react this much...
“Alright.” I said. “Let’s see why that someone took the horn... But he better have a good explanation.”


P.O.V of Elsa.

We made our way to the inn.
When we entered, a blonde woman greeted us in the coldest of ways.
We took our rooms and all ate together. I left Ustengrave’s note on the table, visible to all.
We waited all evening only to see no one. I waited enough, and the night was dark now. I made my way to the room.
The blonde woman entered it soon after and said, “I’m Delphine, I’m the one who took the Horn.”
handling me the artifact.
“Why didn’t you say so sooner? And why did you took it in the first place?!” I asked.
“Follow me, I’ll answer you somewhere safe.” she answered.
I didn’t had any other choice. I followed her in a secret underground room.
“So, answer me. Why did you took the horn?” I asked upon entering
“To be sure it wasn’t a Thalmor trap.”
A Thal... Seriously? Who is she? If there is someone who risk to be caught by Thalmors, it’s us!
“And I guess you didn’t brought me here only to answer questions.”
“Indeed... But first, I need to make sure you’re the Dragonborn.”
“Why would I need to prove that to you?”
“Because I can help.”
“Help on what?”
“Fighting dragons.”
“We’re enough, thank you” I said, feeling something that is rare : I don’t like her attitude.
“If you’re Dragonborn, you’ll need all the help. I didn’t forgot what the Dragonborn’s purpose is. Unlike the others.”
“And what is my purpose?”
“To exterminate the Dragons. You’re the only one who can kill a dragon for good.”
“Yes it’s true. Once again, Why would I need your help for that task?”
“I have informations you could use.”
“I’m intelligent enough to figure many things out. What kind of information you’d provide me with?”
“Not before I make sure you’re Dragonborn.”
“Alright. Good bye.” I’ve had enough of her already. I don’t need to prove anything! ...Gods I feel like Aleena right now...
“Wait!”
“No! Either we trust each others. Or it’s good bye. I already have what I need” I said, getting up the stairs.
“Please! If you’re Dragonborn, you have to help me stop the Dragons.”
“Then what are your informations?” I said, turning to her.
She sighed, “Alright, here is one I can tell you. The dragons are getting back to life. I don’t know how or why, but they do.”
“And that is interesting, indeed. But what could make a Dragon come back?” I wondered, holding my chin with my right hand.
“This I don’t know. But what I do know, is where the next one will raise.” answered Delphine.
“Then let’s go. We’ll depart tomorrow.” I said, getting back in my room.

End of Chapter 11
Skyrim Warmaiden. Chapter 11.
Finally, after the end of death of the dragonborn, Elsa and Aleena resume their adventures in Skyrim^^ Hope you'll like it^^
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It's been some time I didn't said I'm alive... I'm back and begin with a tag!

Tagged by: :iconblue-angel12:

RULES:
-Each person has to share 10 facts about themselves. (Optional) 
-Answer the 10 questions asked by the person who tagged you and make up 10 questions for your tagged people.
-Choose as many people as you choose and put their icons in your journal.
-Go to their page and inform them that they have been tagged. (Though, if you put their icon on the entry, they'll probably notice anyway. But hey, better safe than sorry). 
-NOT something like "you're tagged if you read this."
-You have to legitimately tag the people you choose.
-No tag-back.
-If you don't do tag games, then hey, don't worry about it. Go on ahead and ignore the entry (or at least PM me and let me know).


10 Facts About Me

-I'm ambidextrous;
-I'm a man of science by mind. But a philosopher by heart;
-I love to read;
-I'm a good cook. But be prepared if I cook something I invented;
-I like to RP from time to time;
-I'm LOVE sci-fi, especialy Arthur C. Clarke;
-The closest thing to a religion where I recognise myselft is the Celtic way of seeing things (heathen);
-I NEVER stop having a story to imagine or tell;
-I lost some of my oldest memories due to an illness when I was kid;
-I never go out without my dogtags even through I'm not in the army;

Answers to the Questions

1)What's your favourite video game?
Skyrim and Runescape (can't choose between them)

2) Do you read often?
Yes. Yes I do.

3)What are your 5 best movies you've ever seen?
Hard... lets say : Cloud atlas, Hard candy, Scott pilgrim, V for vandetta, Laputa castle in the sky.

4)Name what the best moment of your life was.
When I discovered music with my dad's help.

5)Do you like to draw? If you do, what kind?(digital, traditional...)
I like to, but I often draw plants, even through I'm not good at it. (Pen and paper, no more)

6)Have you ever cosplayed before?
No, but I'd love to some day.

7)I heard a couple months ago that cosplaying would be forbidden in the US. Americans, what do you think about this?
I'm French, and wonder what could motivate such thing.

8)Do you like puzzle games like Portal?
Just a little, getting stuck is something I hate.

9)Name the most embarassing thing that has ever happened to you.
And What if I don't?

10)Name 5 of your favourite artists here in dA.
:icongenzoman:, :iconmichael-goldenheart:, :iconnestkeeper:, :icontroll-or-not-troll: and :iconthedurrrrian:


MY QUESTIONS :
1) If you had just enough time to do one thing before getting away from everything, what would you do?
2) If there is only one band you want to see live forever, which one is it?
3) What is the most memorable moment of your life so far?
4) Best movie ever?
5) Question five?
6) Do you like to read?
7) If yes to 6). What is your favourite writer?
8) Do you practice sport? and witch one?
9) Best TV serie ever?
10) How would you describe your country?


I don't have mush people to tag... but here goes one (the others already did it).

I tag...

:iconladarka117:

feel free to do it, of course^^
  • Mood: Artistic
  • Listening to: Elvenking - the pagan manifesto
It's been some time I didn't said I'm alive... I'm back and begin with a tag!

Tagged by: :iconblue-angel12:

RULES:
-Each person has to share 10 facts about themselves. (Optional) 
-Answer the 10 questions asked by the person who tagged you and make up 10 questions for your tagged people.
-Choose as many people as you choose and put their icons in your journal.
-Go to their page and inform them that they have been tagged. (Though, if you put their icon on the entry, they'll probably notice anyway. But hey, better safe than sorry). 
-NOT something like "you're tagged if you read this."
-You have to legitimately tag the people you choose.
-No tag-back.
-If you don't do tag games, then hey, don't worry about it. Go on ahead and ignore the entry (or at least PM me and let me know).


10 Facts About Me

-I'm ambidextrous;
-I'm a man of science by mind. But a philosopher by heart;
-I love to read;
-I'm a good cook. But be prepared if I cook something I invented;
-I like to RP from time to time;
-I'm LOVE sci-fi, especialy Arthur C. Clarke;
-The closest thing to a religion where I recognise myselft is the Celtic way of seeing things (heathen);
-I NEVER stop having a story to imagine or tell;
-I lost some of my oldest memories due to an illness when I was kid;
-I never go out without my dogtags even through I'm not in the army;

Answers to the Questions

1)What's your favourite video game?
Skyrim and Runescape (can't choose between them)

2) Do you read often?
Yes. Yes I do.

3)What are your 5 best movies you've ever seen?
Hard... lets say : Cloud atlas, Hard candy, Scott pilgrim, V for vandetta, Laputa castle in the sky.

4)Name what the best moment of your life was.
When I discovered music with my dad's help.

5)Do you like to draw? If you do, what kind?(digital, traditional...)
I like to, but I often draw plants, even through I'm not good at it. (Pen and paper, no more)

6)Have you ever cosplayed before?
No, but I'd love to some day.

7)I heard a couple months ago that cosplaying would be forbidden in the US. Americans, what do you think about this?
I'm French, and wonder what could motivate such thing.

8)Do you like puzzle games like Portal?
Just a little, getting stuck is something I hate.

9)Name the most embarassing thing that has ever happened to you.
And What if I don't?

10)Name 5 of your favourite artists here in dA.
:icongenzoman:, :iconmichael-goldenheart:, :iconnestkeeper:, :icontroll-or-not-troll: and :iconthedurrrrian:


MY QUESTIONS :
1) If you had just enough time to do one thing before getting away from everything, what would you do?
2) If there is only one band you want to see live forever, which one is it?
3) What is the most memorable moment of your life so far?
4) Best movie ever?
5) Question five?
6) Do you like to read?
7) If yes to 6). What is your favourite writer?
8) Do you practice sport? and witch one?
9) Best TV serie ever?
10) How would you describe your country?


I don't have mush people to tag... but here goes one (the others already did it).

I tag...

:iconladarka117:

feel free to do it, of course^^

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Favourite male character : Spike from cowboy bebop and Sherlock Holmes from the BBC Sherlock Serie
Favourite female character : Elsa from Frozen and Edna Mode from The Incredibles
Dream : being published one day (not gonna happen but hey, it's just a dream^^).
Personal Quote : holy shit! that was awsome!=D
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