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Hey everyone! Hope you had an awsome day! For my part, I did! I'm full of energie and inspiration! I wrote a good handful of chapters today and, to let out some steam, I would like to write something else than one of my serie, so... As the title say, I'm ready to take writing request!
But! With some rules...
1. No porn request.
2. Little stories. Please, I'm not going to do anything else than a one-shot write. You may get a long one if what you gave me inspire me.
3. I'm only taking english writings this time, I'm not going to translate.
4. Do request by sending me a note.
5. Do not hate me if I'm taking more than a month for your request, or if I say that I don't want to do it.
6. If you got anything that can help me see or inspire me in some way about your request (A music, a picture, or anything else...), feel free to link them in your note^^.

That being said... As you're not many watching me... Maybe, I'll do all of your request^^.
I wish you a good day/night^^.
Chapter 14 : Discovery.

« And I suppose your help will not be free... » said Faye. « I wonder how well a Bounty Hunter is in combat... » responded Martin. Faye prepared her weapons, the Nord stopped her « Calm down, I didn't mean it like that. ». Faye regained composure and asked, « What is it that you meant ? ». « You see, we have a problem to solve... Wanna help us save our world ? », before Faye could answer, Viconia stepped in, « You must be jocking ! We don't even know a thing about her ! ». « Neither does she. », responded Martin. Viconia didn't said a word and the silence came in. « So, what do you say, Faye ? », finally asked Martin. « Fair enough... » she answered, after some seconds, thinking.
A discussion began, the three new companions entered Faye's ship, making a summuary of what they needed to fix it. Fortunately, Martin knew how to obtain, or replace, them. On the way of the discussion, a powerfull blizzard woke up, too powerfull for Martin's 'clear sky' shout. Faye offered them to stay, the time the storm calm down. In those hours of waiting, the three of them got to know each other, better. Faye told the stories of her adventures. Martin and Viconia did the same. They got along pretty well, not even seeing the blizzard stopped. On the discussion, Martin explained to Faye what he would have to do, in order to defeat Alduin. At sun rise, the three of them remembered one thing... They didn't slept that night !
Too late now, the world can't wait ! They prepared themselfs, and began their walking journey.
After many hours of walking, they were getting close to the High Hrothgar. Martin was always curious. And him and Faye were still discussing about the galaxy.
Faye explained that the galaxie had lived a troubling period, not long ago. That is now some years that the peace is going, thanks to a Choosen One, named Michael GoldenHeart, and his wife, Elsa, who restored peace with the help of the Galactic Gardians.
Some meters after, the team was a the temple's doors. Viconia pointed something and said, « And here is who we could have called... ». Martin kept silence while Faye wondered, « A Dragon ? », « Yeah, flying on his back... » answered Viconia, « No way in my life I do that. » said Faye. Martin did a facepalm and asked, « Why don't we, ever, think about those things ?! », « Too simple ? » shruged Viconia. Martin stayed silent and motioned the team to continue. The two women made a little laugh at his reaction and resumed following him.
The way to the Throat of the World had been as difficult as always. Fortunately, Faye had a warm coat, Viconia had Martin's cape, and Martin... The cold never bothered him anyway...
Once up. Martin was about to open the elder scroll. « Are you sure about that, Mrann d'ssinss ? » asked Viconia, making a step to him. Martin made a serene smile, stepped forward, and kissed the Drow's forehead, then, he pat the up of her head, reassuring her, « Do not fear, my love. It's going to be alright, I promise. ». Viconia lifted her head, letting Martin see her wet eyes. « Do not do those kind of promise... It me feel like you'll never really come back... ». Martin took Viconia in his arms and softly said, « And that's now you're worried about it ? ». « Because that's only now that I see the dangers you put yourself in... » said the Drow, nestling her head in Martin's torso. He lifted her chin, making her look at him in the eyes. He began, « I'll- », « -Atchooo ! », interupted Faye's sneeze, « Sorry... I'm not used to the cold. » she apologized.
Martin smiled, looking at Viconia again, and resumed what he was saying, « I'll return to you. » looking deep in her brown eyes. He gave her a kiss of true love, a the end of which, he wispered « I love you. », and made some steps back, opening the elder scroll. Martin had his vision blured, and felt himself go.
While he was in trance and was learning the shout he needed, Faye asked Viconia, « Are those scrolls that dangerous ? ». « The smartest of men have difficulties understanding them, but most of all, even with their rigurous training, they usually end up blind. » simply answered Viconia, her two hands on her chest, worrying. « Ow... But, what are those scrolls ? ». « It's difficult to explain, they are everyting but nothing, they know all, nothing and less. » Faye looked at Viconia with a puzzled look, « Sorry, it's the kind of things you only explain with sentences like this... » finished Viconia.
The two women stayed in silence some seconds. Faye was about to ask something else. When they heard a shout behing them, « FUS RO DAH ! ». Faye was instantly projected out of the montain. Viconia quickly turned, widening her eyes at the sight of a gread black Dragon.

Next, Chapter 15 : the Dragon and the child.
Chapitre 14 : Découvertes.

« Je suppose que votre aide ne seras pas gratuite... » dit Faye. « Je me demande se que donne une chasseuse de prime en combat... » dit Martin. Faye prépara alors ces armes, « Du calme, je ne penser pas a cela... » l’arrêtât le nordique. Faye se remis en position et demandât, « A quoi pensiez vous ? ». « Voyez vous, nous avons un certain problème a régler... Sa vous direz de nous aider a sauvez notre monde ? », avant que Faye ne puisse répondre, Viconia s'interposât, « Tu rigole j’espère ! Nous ne savons rien d'elle ! ». « Et elle ne sais rien de nous. », répondit Martin. Viconia ne dit rien a cette argument et un silence s'en suivit. « Qu'en dites vous Faye ? » finit par demander Martin. « Sa me semble un bon arrangement... » dit Faye, après quelques secondes de réflexions.
La discutions suivit son cour, les trois nouveau compagnons entrèrent dans le vaisseau de Faye, pour faire l'inventaire des matériaux que les réparation demanderons. Heureusement, Martin savez comment les obtenir, ou les remplacer. Lors de leurs discutions, un puissant blizzard c'était lever, largement trop puissant pour le crie de 'ciel dégager' de Martin. Faye leurs proposât alors de rester, le temps que le climat devienne plus vivable. Pendant les quelques heurs a attendre, les trois firent connaissance. Faye leurs parlât et expliquât pas mal de ces aventures. Martin et Viconia firent de même. Ils s'entendirent tous plutôt bien, n'aillant même pas remarquer que le blizzard c'était lever. Lors des discutions, Martin expliquât en détaille se qu'ils devaient faire pour vaincre Alduin. A la lever du jour, le groupe se rendit compte que... ils avaient oublier de dormir !
Tant-pis pour le repos, le monde n'attend pas ! Les trois se préparèrent, et allèrent dehors, commençant a marcher.
Après plusieurs heurs de marches, ils étaient maintenant plutôt proche du Haut Hrothgar. Martin était toujours curieux. Lui et Faye discutez encore de la galaxie.
Faye expliquât que la galaxie avez vécu une période de trouble il y as peut. Depuis quelques années, un certain Élu, nommer Michael GoldenHeart, et sa femme, Elsa, rétablirent la paix grâce a l'aide des Gardien Galactique.
Quelques mètres plus loin, le groupe se trouvât au porte du temple. Viconia pointât quelque chose du doit et dit « Et voilà qui nous aurions put utiliser... ». Martin marquât un silence pendant que Faye s'étonnât, « Un Dragon ? », « Oui, en montant sur son dos... » rétorquât Viconia. « Pas moyen... Moi vivante, je montrais pas la dessus. » dit catégoriquement Faye. Martin fit un facepalm et demandât « Pourquoi c'est le genre de chose auxquelles on pense jamais?! », « Parce que c'est trop simple ? » dit Viconia en haussant les épaules. Martin restât silencieux et fit simplement signe a ces deux compagnons de rentrer. Les deux femmes eurent un petit rire et reprirent la marche.
Le chemin jusque la Gorge du Monde fut tout aussi dure qu'avant. Heureusement que Faye avez prévu un manteau chaud et que Viconia avez la cape de Martin.
Arriver en haut. Martin se préparât a ouvrir la parchemin des ancien. « Tu est sur de toi Mrann d'ssinss ? » demandât Viconia, s'avançant vers lui. Martin fit un sourire serein, un pat en avant et fit un baiser sur le front de la Drow, puis, posant une main sur le haut de sa tête, la rassurant, « Ne t'en fait pas. Sa va aller, promis. ». Viconia relava la tête, laissant Martin voire les yeux humides de la Drow. « Ne fait pas se genre de promesse... j'ai l'impression que tu n'en reviendra pas... ». Martin pris Viconia dans ces bras et dit doucement, « Et c'est maintenant que tu t’inquiète de sa ? ».
« Sa n'est que maintenant que je me rend compte des dangers dans lesquelles tu te met... » dit la Drow, blottissant sa tête dans le torse de Martin. Martin leva le menton de la Drow, la faisant le regarder dans les yeux. Il commençât a lui répondre, « Je revi- », « -Atchooo ! », interrompu un éternuement de Faye, « Pardon... j'ai pas l'habitude du froid. » s'excusât la chasseuse de prime. Martin fit un sourire, reportât son regard sur Viconia et repris, « Je reviendrais. » se plongeant dans les yeux marrons de la Drow. Il lui fit un baiser d'amour, a la fin de ce dernier, il chuchotât, « je t'aime », et s'écartât d'elle, sortant le parchemin et l'ouvrant. Martin eu sa vision troubler, et se sentis partir. Pendant qu'il était en transe et apprenez le crie dont il avez besoin, Faye demandât a Viconia, « C'est si dangereux que sa ? ». « Les plus grands érudits ont des difficulté a les comprendre, mais surtout, malgré un entraînement rigoureux, ils y laissent en général la vue. » répondit simplement Viconia, les deux mains sur sa poitrine en signe d'inquiétude. « Ho... Mais c'est quoi ces parchemins ? ». « C'est dure a expliquer... ils sont a la fois tout et rien, ils contiennent toute la connaissance de l'univers, mais ne connaissent rien... » Faye regardât Viconia d'un aire perplexe, « Désoler, c'est le genre de chose qui ne s'expliquent qu'avez des phrases du genre... » s'excusât la Drow. Les deux femmes restèrent en silence quelques instants, Faye était sur le point de demander une autre chose. Quand elles entendirent un crie derrière elles, « FUS RO DAH ! ». Faye fut propulser hors de la montagne, et Viconia se retournât en vitesse, écarquillant les yeux a la vue d'un grand Dragon noir.

Prochainement, Chapitre 15 : Le Dragon et l'enfant.
I Write this, I'm not even finished with my speechlessness (Don't even know if this is a word)...
ALL the Galactic Guardian serie was an EPIC saga... I love it so much.
What can't I say and praise about it? All the characters are really good, your writing style is as good to read as always, the WHOLE story of EVERY book is awsome. This book is awsome, even if my fav keep being the fifth one, this one is not far.
I can't wait to finish my video review! And can't wait to have your feedbacks on it!^^
You are a very talented writer. You are going to archive your dream! And I'll be there, suporting you the best I can! And I'll not be alone! Everyone will be with me! Right?
To this serie, and to you... I raise my glass again, and offer you champagne to celebrate!
In the streets of a desert city, the three humans were running.

« How did this happened ? » howled Will.
« How do you think it had happen ?! We kept this secret from them for too long ! » responded John.
« Why did he felt like doing it was a good idea in the first place ? » continued Saeko.
The team stopped, regaining their stamina, hidden in the entrance of a building.
Will stomped the wall with one of his fist, « We were supposed to protect humanity ! ».
« Calm down Major ! », yelled Saeko.
« How can I keep calm, lieutenant ? To see all that ! After all those sacrifices ?! We have lost it ! », shouted the Major while hitting the wall again, making his arm pass through it like it was paper.
The lieutenant grabbed Will by the collar and said to him, « Don't loose control ! ».
The major said nothing, calmed down, and regained composure.
« What do we do now ? The unit is dead... ».
« We are alive, no ? Then the unit is not dead... » said the Lieutenant. Making a small pause, she finally continued, « We are the last three titans of the Anti-z... The three last lines of defences of humanity... What do you say ? Will you follow me to this last mission ? ».
« Yes ! » said John without hesitation. The two looked at Will, waiting his answer.
« I don't feel like dying with regrets... but... meh... Even if I live, I'll loose the woman of my dreams. » said the Major, looking at Saeko and preparing his rifle.

It is settled, the last hope of earth lies within those three.
(ENG) Anti-z unit, fist draft teaser.
This is a little teaser for a project I'm working on. It'll be the first storie I will write in english from end to end.^^
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  • Listening to: JubyPhonic-Imagination Forest (English cover)
Hey everyone! Hope you had an awsome day! For my part, I did! I'm full of energie and inspiration! I wrote a good handful of chapters today and, to let out some steam, I would like to write something else than one of my serie, so... As the title say, I'm ready to take writing request!
But! With some rules...
1. No porn request.
2. Little stories. Please, I'm not going to do anything else than a one-shot write. You may get a long one if what you gave me inspire me.
3. I'm only taking english writings this time, I'm not going to translate.
4. Do request by sending me a note.
5. Do not hate me if I'm taking more than a month for your request, or if I say that I don't want to do it.
6. If you got anything that can help me see or inspire me in some way about your request (A music, a picture, or anything else...), feel free to link them in your note^^.

That being said... As you're not many watching me... Maybe, I'll do all of your request^^.
I wish you a good day/night^^.

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